Monday, September 12, 2016

Paranormal Romance Query that Resulted in a Contract for Debut Novelist Katherine Eddinger Smits

As a continuation of my posts that feature authors whose query letters actually resulted in a contract, I'm thrilled to welcome as my guest today a great writer friend, Katherine Eddinger Smits. Congratulations on your debut novel, Water Dreams--I just got my copy from Amazon HERE and am so excited to 'dive' in to your book featuring mermaids!

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First, because I have a great many aspiring authors who follow this blog, would you share your query letter here, and tell us why you think it got a response? Also, you've had sort of a tumultuous ride to publication--can  you share that with my readers, as well?

I actually had two successful query letters for Water Dreams. The first query was to Secret Cravings. It was the first publisher I queried and I was shocked that my manuscript was accepted. Unfortunately, Secret Cravings declared bankruptcy ten days after my book released as an eBook. The book was removed from the market with all the others from Secret Cravings and I had to find another publisher. I only submitted Water Dreams to two others before Foundations, LLC accepted it. One of the publishers that didn’t accept the book asked for a full manuscript based on the query letter. I will include copies of both query letters, which were similar but not exactly alike. I think there were several reasons why these query letters were so successful. First, I reviewed a lot of other successful query letters and patterned mine after them. I tried to hook the editor with an intriguing first sentence. Then, I provided enough information about the book so that the editor knew a little about the main characters, their problems, the word count, genre, and that the book was complete.
For the first query, I didn’t have any publication history, but I listed my membership in Sunshine StateRomance Authors (SSRA) and my PRO status with Romance Writers of America, to let the editor know that I am a serious writer. For the query to Foundations, I was able to list my successful publication with Secret Cravings and tell them that the rights to the book had reverted to me after the bankruptcy.

One of the most important things I did was research the publishers before I submitted. I studied their websites and found out everything I could about them before I sent my query. Then I made sure I complied with their submission guidelines completely. In the case of Secret Cravings, I even downloaded their style guide and formatted my manuscript according to their requirements. The idea was that when the editor looked at it, he or she would realize there would be a minimum amount of editing required because I had already done a lot of the work.
Finally, I found a connection with both publishers that might help my book stand out from the slush pile. Several fellow members of SSRA published with Secret Cravings and one suggested I use her name when I queried. I took her name out of the letter included here, but I mentioned her in the letter to the editor. I wouldn’t do this without permission, but since she suggested it, I took her up on it. I decided to submit to Foundations because I found my cover artist from Secret Cravings on their staff list. I loved the cover she designed for me and wanted to use it again, so I said that in the query letter. It not only provided a connection with them, it gave them the opportunity to ask her about me and what I was like to work with, if they wanted to do so.
If all of this sounds like a lot of work, believe me, it was. I spent many hours preparing my query letters and submission packets. However, I think it was better than a scattershot approach, querying and submitting everywhere and getting many rejections. 

Here are the two query letters. The first is the one for Secret Cravings.

Dear Editor:
“The Heartless Mermaid,” a wooden sculpture recently purchased by Nik’s boss, hangs on the wall at Sponger Souvenirs, the shop where Nik (not Niki) Aronopulos works, in the small Greek community of Tarpon Springs, Florida. It carries an air of menace, frightening her more than an inanimate object should. It almost makes her want to quit her job, but she refuses to let an old piece of wood get the better of her.
When a mysterious stranger enters the shop and echoes her thoughts about the creepy carving, Nik agrees. However, when he tells her that he is a kind of wizard, and that mermaids are real and interested in her, she figures he’s a con artist. She’s too smart to fall for his line. Then she meets the gorgeous, but arrogant, Bas, who insists that in water he shape-shifts into one of the mermen—they call themselves Nerei, a name derived from a Greek word for sea nymphs--and her father was one of them too. Bas turns Nik’s life into a tale that could come straight out of Greek mythology. She must fight tricky mermaids, kidnappers, a water phobia, recurrent nightmares, and her growing attraction to both the con artist (aka swamp mage) and the lunatic, Bas.
Bas knows he and his twin need to convince Nik to cooperate with their testing, so they can determine why she is able to survive away from water, while they are dependent on it for life. Although he considers her an inferior crossbreed, he can’t stop thinking about her. Since she refuses to help them, and the Nerei forbid interspecies relationships, he’s on the hook.
Bas and Nik have to bridge the gulf, for the sake of everyone, especially the two of them.
Complete at approximately 93,000 words, this paranormal romance explores what happens when a contemporary Greek girl meets her soul mate—only sometimes, he has a tail. It is the first of a planned series of three books about the world of shape-shifting mermaids (Nerei), Swamp Mages and humans involved with them.
I am an active member of Sunshine State Romance Authors and colleague of (Name Removed), who publishes with Secret Cravings. I have obtained PRO status with Romance Writers of America.
Enclosed, please see the synopsis and complete manuscript for Water Dreams. I look forward to hearing from you soon. I plan to submit this work simultaneously to other publishers, but Secret Cravings is my first choice. I reviewed paranormal novels offered on your website and think this work is a good fit, because you provide your readers with a number of books about shape-shifters, but none of them are mermaids. I believe this book will work well with the other shifter books and at the same time offer your readers a different take on this popular concept.

Katherine Eddinger Smits 

Here is the one for Foundations:

Dear Editors:

Nik believes she is an average Greek-American, except for her phobia about water. When she gets a glimpse of gorgeous Bas at a disastrous Epiphany cross dive in her hometown of Tarpon Springs, Florida, she is fascinated but surprised at her interest in a tourist. Then a man who claims he is a swamp mage warns her not to trust strangers who want something from her. She thinks he is a con artist and dismisses his advice. When she runs into Bas again and he tells her he is a Nerei, a race of merfolk who shape-shift and need her help, she decides he is a lunatic.

Bas must convince Nik to cooperate with testing, so his species can determine why she is able to survive out of water, while Nerei, who share DNA with her, cannot. Although he considers her an inferior crossbreed, he can’t stop thinking about her. Since she refuses to help them, and the Nerei forbid interspecies relationships, he’s on the hook.

Complete at approximately 83,000 words, this contemporary paranormal romance explores what happens when a young woman meets her soul mate, who is a merman. It is the first of a planned trilogy about the world of Nerei, Swamp Mages and the humans involved with them.

I am an active member of Sunshine State Romance Authors and I have obtained PRO status with Romance Writers of America.

Sweet Cravings Publishing, a division of Secret Cravings Publishing, digitally published Water Dreams, Book One of the Love’s Siren Song series, on Aug. 21, 2015. On Sept. 1, 2015, Secret Cravings declared bankruptcy and the book is no longer available. All rights reverted to me. I will provide a copy of the reversion letter, if requested. The book was only for sale for ten days, but in that time, it reached number one on the Sweet Cravings Top Sellers list.

I was pleased to discover that Dawne′ Dominque, who designed the cover for Water Dreams, is a Foundations Books staff member. I decided to submit to you because I loved the cover and was impressed with her professionalism.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Katherine E. Smits 

If you noticed that in the second letter, the word count went from 93,000 to 83,000, that’s because I edited it again before querying Foundations and cut another 10,000 words. The second query letter is also shorter than the first one and I think a better-crafted letter. The effect of practice!

Thanks for sharing your story and your letters! You are a perfect example of the tenacity every writer NEEDS to have to be successful! Tell me, what do you think is THE most important thing writers can do for themselves to get an agent/publisher in today's market?

I say this to anyone who will listen (and some who won’t), join a writer’s group. RWA and local chapters are the best. They keep you informed on everything you need to know about the publishing business, provide support, teach you the craft and more. I am so grateful to SSRA for all the help the members gave me. I’m sure I wouldn’t be published without them.

If you could have done anything differently with your writing career so far, what would it be?

It would be nice if I had a crystal ball and knew in advance that Secret Cravings would declare bankruptcy. I would have been prepared for the shock and pain of losing my book so soon after it was born. However, I think I would still have published with them. It was a foot in the door. If I could do anything differently, I wouldn’t wait so long to start writing or waste so much time not writing and not finishing my first book. It took seven years before publication, but most of the time I only worked on it occasionally. After I joined SSRA, I rewrote it several times and had it published within a year.

Who are your writing role models, and how have they influenced you?

My grandmother was my first role model. She wrote and published a book of recipes and stories of growing up on a farm in New Hampshire. She did this when she was in her 70’s and I was a teenager. Macmillan published the book and it had several editions, including hard cover and paperback. That was before digital publishing, when it was unheard of for an unknown to land a contract with a major publishing house, especially with a cookbook, but she did it. Knowing that she accomplished this gave me hope that I could publish too.
My other role models are the members of SSRA who are published authors. I learn absolutely everything I can from them about the craft.
For my own writing, I don’t have anyone I consciously use as a role model. I try to nurture my own voice and tell the stories I would enjoy reading. I have been a voracious reader my whole life of everything, although more fiction than nonfiction. I am sure I have been influenced by many authors over time. Stephen King is like the god of fiction for me. There are too many others to mention.

LOL--I agree about Stephen King! He is pretty incredible! Do you have any upcoming releases? If so, tell us about it!

No new releases yet, but I have one manuscript in rough draft that I’m editing. It’s another contemporary paranormal romance set in Florida. The working title is Witch Trial Legacy. Sybilla Sanborn sees visions of future tragedies but no one believes her when she tries to warn them and she is not able to stop the events she foresees. She moves to Cassadaga, Florida where she hopes the mediums who live there can help her find a way to help prevent these horrible events. Conn is an Iraq war vet left with physical and emotional scars, who doesn’t believe in psychic phenomena. They will need each other to heal their own pain and save the lives of many others. However, will they be able to overcome judgement, prejudice, and fear in order to do so? Also, I have the second book in the Love’s Siren Song series outlined and the first chapter posted on my website. I put it up because so many people asked me about what happens next, that I wanted to give them a little something, like an appetizer. (Warning: it includes spoilers of the first book.) I intend to have the rough draft finished by the end of this year. I hope that I’ll be able to edit it and get it published in a reasonable amount of time after that.

What's one fact about you that most people don't know.

I’m left-handed. Most people don’t notice because I do a lot of things right-handed, like use a computer mouse. However, if you ever go out to dinner with me, you will know, because I insist on sitting where I won’t bump elbows with anyone. I hate that.

Life is harder for a leftie, I'm convinced! Okay, I know people will want to check you out online. Can you give us your website links and contact information?

Sure. My website is: I’m on Facebook as Kathy Eddinger Smits and my Facebook author page is Katherine Eddinger Smits. My twitter handle is @katherinesmits. I don’t tweet a lot, but I’m trying to do it more often. You can also find me on the Foundations, LLC author page at and my e-mail is

Water Dreams -- Blurb:
Nik—an outwardly normal young woman terrified by water, living in the Greek-American town of Tarpon Springs, Florida.

Bas—a shapeshifter merman tasked with obtaining Nik’s help to gain what his species most desires.

The Nerei—a race of beings who want humans to continue to believe they are mythological.
What happens when Nik refuses to help Bas and the Nerei?

How will Nik and Bas save each other when they fall in love, against his species laws?

Katherine Smits Bio:
Katherine Eddinger Smits grew up in Tarpon Springs, Florida. Although not from a Greek background, she fell in love with the Greek culture of the town and its close-knit families. She moved away years ago, but she still visits Tarpon Springs frequently to visit old friends and classmates, walk the beaches or shop and eat at the Sponge Docks.
Katherine started writing stories in grade school and always intended to write novels someday. However, she put off writing fiction while she raised her family and worked as a clinical social worker at four different Veterans Affairs Medical Centers around the country. She was devastated to learn that her first career choice—mermaid, was not realistic. However, Katherine found helping veterans and their families fulfilling, and managed to squeeze writing into her life. Whether it was writing clinical assessments, creating brochures for social programs, or putting together newsletters for clubs and organizations, she always had some kind of writing project in the works.
Katherine lives with her husband in Homosassa, Florida and Falling Waters, West Virginia. They have a daughter who lives in Alexandria, Virginia and a son, daughter-in-law and granddaughter who reside in Chesapeake, Virginia.

Water Dreams, Katherine’s debut novel, is a paranormal romance set in Tarpon Springs, Florida and is the first book in the Love’s Siren Song series. Available now from Foundations or Amazon.

Thanks for being so candid and helpful today, Katherine! I so appreciate it, and can't wait to read my copy of WATER DREAMS! :)

Monday, August 29, 2016

Query that Resulted in a Contract--Linda Tillis and her debut novel

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I'm so happy to welcome a good writing friend, and debut author, Linda Tillis as my guest today! Her first book, A Heart Made for Love, was released this week in paperback and e-book. Isn't the cover gorgeous?

Linda, welcome to my blog today! Let's get started with some questions! 

First, since many of my blog readers are aspiring authors, would you share your query letter/email here, and tell us why you think it got a response? What made it successful?

I’m not really sure why the query worked, but I did use the “Query Bible” in the Sunshine State Romance Authors Library!
(Here's Linda's Query):

At ten years of age, Mae Hinton learned to cope with tragedy when her mama died in childbirth. Overnight, she found herself filling her mother’s shoes as caregiver for her two younger brothers and papa. At seventeen years, she was content with her peaceful life in Trenton, Florida, the year 1903.

That peace is destroyed when young Mae is faced with every woman's worst nightmare.

As she heals-physically and mentally-from the attack, she accepts that everything happens for a reason. Mae was blessed with the support of a loving family and friends and believes she has been tasked by her Lord to come to the aid of other women who have faced her nightmare, and of building a place of refuge where victims can heal, learn, and gain independence.

Mae never saw her attackers and has no way of knowing that one of them is very near, watching and waiting.  As she works to help other victims her patience is tested when she meets hypocritical religious folk, misguided do-gooders, and men who have higher regard for their livestock than for their women.

When her attacker surfaces again, and a mistaken identity murder rattles her nerve, will Mae's skill with a gun be her salvation or will vengeance truly belong to the Lord?  The love story of Mae Hinton and Edward Finch addresses the question of how couples deal with differences in their personal beliefs.

At 78,900 words, A Heart Made For Love is a women’s fiction/historical romance and deals with the ultimate test of a young woman’s faith, as well as the dark side of domestic abuse and mistreatment of women in by-gone times. 
A Heart Made For Love is my first completed novel. I have been published in The Florida Wildlife Magazine. I spent twenty years working in Crime Scene Investigation, which supports my knowledge of domestic violence. I am a PRO member of RWA as well as a member of the Sunshine State Romance Authors, Inc. 

Great query, Linda! I can see why you got the editor's attention! Okay, next question: What is THE most important thing writers can do for themselves to get an agent/publisher in today's market?

Write the best book you can, then never give up on it.

If you could have done anything differently with your writing career so far, what would it be?

I would have started sooner. I’ve been a reader all my life and thought, “Someday I’ll try to write one.” But it was not until my husband said, “You should write a book,” that I really believed I could.

Aw!! What a great husband you have!! Okay, who are your writing role models, and how have they influenced you?

I love Amanda Quick and her sharp humor, which is really funny because my first book is anything but humorous.

Okay, now what we've all been waiting for! Tell us about your debut book, A Heart Made For Love!
I had a co-worker read A HeartMade For Love for me and when she finished she said, “I would have loved to have had a brother like Samuel.”  I knew then that I had to write a book for him and I named it A Man With A Pure Heart. In this sequel he is grown, has completed training, and is a Deputy with the Leon County Sheriff’s Office in 1910.  Because he has “visits” from his deceased mother he is very adept at catching killers. When the local school teacher is found naked and beaten to death he vows to find the killer, not only because the man is an animal, but because Samuel falls in love with the teacher’s replacement, her sister.  The search for the killer is a race for time as Samuel’s mother advises “another is in danger”.   The first chapter is included at the end of A Heart Made For Love.

Last question: What's one fact about you that most people don't know?

I am deathly afraid of speaking to a crowd.  When I was twelve I memorized a poem for a program at school.  I knew that thing upside down and backwards and nearly drove my family crazy repeating it for practice.  The day of the recital I was the second on stage. Two lines into my poem they realized they had forgotten to turn on the footlights. They turned them on, I looked down, and when I looked back up the poem was gone.  I walked off stage to a back room and sat on the floor and cried.  A very handsome senior came and sat on the floor with me and held me while I blubbered all over his school sweater. For years I testified in court from misdemeanors to murders, and never got over the fear.

I know people will want to check you out online. Can you give us your website links and contact information?

My e-mail address is
My website is
My twitter  @Linda34434

BUY Link for A Heart Made for Love on Amazon HERE.

Blurb from A Heart Made for Love:

In rural Florida , 1903, Mae Hinton cares for her father and younger brothers, trying to fill her deceased mother's shoes. Her life is shattered and her faith tested when her innocence is stolen by roving miscreants. Left unconscious, unable to identify her attackers, she pledges to help other victimized women. She pursues an education and learns to deal with bigoted ministers, well-to-do hypocrites, and men with higher regard for their livestock than their women.

Edward Finch is nearly done with medical studies in England when he comes home for the holidays. Love flourishes, and Mae seems close to achieving her dreams of both true love and a haven for victims, once she can explain to him why she carries a pistol. Then her new-found happiness is upset by a murder as one of her attackers returns.

She may settle this herself...or she may find that vengeance truly belongs to God.

Thursday, August 18, 2016

Transitioning to Middle School--my Daughter's Gold Award Project

It's not often I include details about my family on this blog--I sort of feel there should be a filter
This is Devon, the blog's creative genius!
between my kids and my work. But this is an exception because...

I'm so freaking proud of my daughter! 

This project she's undertaken, How to Rock Middle School, is a two-fold effort: 1) she had a crappy transition from elementary to middle school. Like, crap-tasticly crappy. And she wants to do her part to make sure other kids don't suffer the same. 2) she's creating something that will 'live' without her when she graduates to count for her Girl Scout Gold Award project.

For those of you that don't know, the GS Gold Award is the highest level you can achieve in Girl Scouting (comparable to the Eagle Scout award for Boy Scouting). Devon has been a girl scout since she was a Daisy her kindergarten year, and continued with a troop through middle school, then went it alone as a "Juliette" Girl Scout through high school. Just remaining in girl scouting all 13 years is amazing enough, but to cap it off with a Gold Award--pretty incredible!

So if you have a minute, can you check out her blog here? Maybe you have a child starting middle school this year? This is a GREAT resource to allay his/her fears. Maybe your child had a good or bad middle school experience they'd like to share? Devon's blog allows for people to write in and contribute their stories!

Here's the link to her blog:

And here's the video she made to achieve her Silver Award in Girl Scouting--the video that can also be found on her blog!

Thanks for allowing my moment of Momma Pride!
Happily My Ever After,

P.S. Want that blog link again for surviving middle school? Click HERE!

Thursday, August 11, 2016

Jennifer Taylor and new new book HEARTBEAT OF THE MOON plus GIVEAWAY

I'd like to welcome my long-time writing friend--a gal who always has a smile on her face and a song on her lips--Jennifer Taylor! She's here today to talk about her new release--check out the awesome cover, and if you scroll to the bottom, she's having a GIVEAWAY!
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Congratulations on your new release, Jennifer! I loved your first book, "Mercy of the Moon" (you can read my Goodreads review HERE) and Ian's character still lives on in my head because he was so troubled, but scrumptious at the same time. Are you revisiting Maggie and Ian in this next book, "Heartbeat of the Moon"? Please say YES!!

Thanks so much for having me, Dylan! Yes, Ian and Maggie’s story continues, and the stakes grow higher as supernatural forces beyond their control threaten their love and lives. Ian is a handful, isn’t he? But so yummy! He continues to take me on surprising journeys, and becomes more complex and appealing with each book.  

I know you and I are both inspired by music when we write. What music did you listen to as you wrote "Heartbeat of the Moon"?

Oh, that’s such a great question. I’ll let you in on a dirty secret: I listen to Sting a lot to help me get close to Ian. I actually have several playlists on my internet radio station: one for Ian titled “Ian’s Angst,” and an upbeat list called, “Maggie and Ian,” with more upbeat, romantic tunes that help to keep their relationship fresh and intriguing to me.  One of my favorite tunes to listen to while writing Heartbeatof the Moon was Elton John’s “Madman Across the Water.” Very haunting song.

Love Elton John--cool fact! Okay, what type of historical research did you have to do for this novel--I'm particularly intrigued by Ian's past in Bedlam!

I research about the history of mental illness, and watch documentaries about treatments, such as bleeding, that were used for mentally ill people during that time period. I am fascinated with medical history, especially before the 19th Century, and have come across some great material. I read a lot about bipolar disorder, and strive to get it right.

I also try very hard to make Maggie’s midwifery scenes authentic. I have an experienced midwife friend who reads the scenes for me to check for accuracy, and consult a book by a 17th Century midwife named Jane Sharp, who not only could read (rare for that age), but she actually wrote a manual on midwifery, called The Midwives Book: or the Whole Art of Midwifry Discovered. It was edited by Elaine Hobby. It’s an incredible mix of no-nonsense how-to, in-depth knowledge, and superstition. What a strong woman! I wish I could meet her.

Now that you have two books published, what are your plans for your next book?

I’m currently working on book #3 of the Rhythm of the Moon series, likely titled Mirrors of the Moon. It continues the story of Maggie and Ian, but also involves a new romance.

As a fellow writer, I'm sure you've been visited perhaps once or twice by the proverbial 'writer's block'. What do you do when the words aren't flowing for you?

It usually means I need to get off my chair for a while and refresh my mind: exercise, music, nature work well. Then I get back to work and just struggle through the rough spots.  Some days are like that.

I know I've asked you this in your previous guest post here, but I'm curious to see if your answer has changed. If you could give any piece of writing advice to aspiring authors out there, what would it be?

Don’t give up. Write every day, even if it’s only 15 minutes. Congratulate yourself for those little successes: the finished chapter, that rejection letter. Join a writer’s organization such as Romance Writers of America where you can learn about the craft and the industry. Seek other writers for encouragement and support. Take chances-enter a contest, get your stuff out there, and develop a thick skin. Have fun with your characters, find a story you can believe in, and hang in there.

It was so great having you today, Jennifer! But, before you leave, can you tell us a little more about "Heartbeat of the Moon", including the most important piece--where we can buy your latest book? :)
Once again, in Heartbeat ofthe Moon, Maggie and Ian fight superstition, and struggle to help their good friend Josef, who is convinced his nephew was attacked by a winged monster. Rumors and fear stir up the town, and the two lovers also have to deal with challenges in their relationship. I also introduce the story of newcomers Bethan and Elunid, a set of identical twins from Wales. Intriguing things happen when they meet one of the town’s hard-working men. Let’s just say love strikes in the most unlikely situations!

Superstition sails into King’s Harbour with tales of winged monsters rising from the dead. Midwife Maggie and husband Ian fight for reason and logic when a friend’s nephew disappears from the grave, and the friend’s behavior becomes more animal than man.

As forces and bizarre events around the two lovers threaten their happiness, Maggie faces challenges from her expectant mothers and struggles to understand Ian’s troubling behavior. Ian endeavors to cure his mind’s affliction but fears the slide into insanity may be fatal.

You can find Jennifer here:
Twitter: @jennifer4taylor

And her new BOOKS ARE HERE: 
Barnes and Noble:
The Wild Rose Press:

Thanks so much for having me today, Dylan! To celebrate the interview, I’d like to offer a GIVEAWAY: anyone who leaves a comment by Sunday (August 14) will be entered in a random drawing to win book #1, Mercy of the Moon!

Wednesday, August 10, 2016

An Agent At Last!

For those of you following me on my blog or Facebook, you know I've been awaiting response from the agent I pitched to at RWA conference (my pitch story is here). Aaaand....*drumroll*...I finally signed my contract for an agent!!

No. Not AN agent. THE agent:

I'm thrilled to announce I have signed a contract for my Young Adult series, beginning with
DELINQUENT, to 3 Seas Literary and the marvelous Cori Deyoe! It's a huge milestone for me, as I have been looking to switch from paranormal romance to YA. Most YA publishers won't even look at your submission without an agent, so landing a talented and experienced agency like 3 Seas is a dream for me!

More to come--like a contract for the series!!--but I was so excited to let you all know about the long-awaited end to my agent journey!

Happily My Ever After,

Tuesday, June 21, 2016

GIVEAWAY with Connie Mann and her new novel, TANGLED LIES

I'm so thrilled to have my good friend and talented writer, Connie Mann, as a guest on my blog today! AND...she's doing a fantastic GIVEAWAY to one lucky reader--simply scroll down to the bottom for details on how to enter for your chance to win a copy of her newest book!

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Hi Connie! So glad you can join me today! I am so excited for your new book, TANGLED LIES. The cover is gorgeous! Before we tell everyone how they might win a FREE COPY, I'd love to ask you some questions on your writing process and career. 

First, what is THE most important thing writers can do for themselves to get an agent/publisher in today's market?
Beyond all the dos and don’ts, I think it still comes down to the writing. All the social media connections in the world won’t help you if you don’t get that story down on paper and submit it. It’s always easier to focus on the peripherals, but you have to block out the distractions and just write. Regularly. Whether you feel like it or not. And once you submit one story, start another instead of waiting and pacing. (Preaching to the choir, here.)

Great advice! (One I need to heed, myself!) Next question: If you could have done anything differently with your writing career so far, what would it be?
I would have taken a deep breath and sent out more projects. I recently went through my computer and was appalled at the number of almost-ready manuscripts I’ve never sent out—or only sent to one publisher. Fear of rejection keep me from doing the final polish and submitting them to publishers or agents. That saved me the sting of rejection, but what if they hadn’t been rejected??

Who are your writing role models, and how have they influenced you?
Many years ago I met Susan Elizabeth Philipps at a writer’s conference mixer and she impressed my socks off. She walked in and went around to every single person there and introduced herself, asked what they wrote. I decided I want to be like that—to see every single person in a room.
AnneLamott’s way with words will always inspire me, move me, and yes, make me wish I could write like that.
SharonSala’s honesty in how she approaches life and the way she has balanced taking care of her ‘Little Mama’ (who has dementia) with her writing has been a huge source of encouragement to me, especially since I am dealing with increasing caregiving in my life these days.

Do you have any upcoming releases? If so, tell us about it!
Currently, I’m busy promoting Tangled Lies and am hoping there will be another book set in Safe Harbor, so stay tuned. In the meantime, my agent has another Florida-set series she’s shopping around and I’m busy scheming and plotting my next suspense book.

Woo Hoo! Okay, last question: What's one fact about you that most people don't know?
The only reason I bake cookies is so I can eat the raw dough. (I know, I know!) There have even been unverified accusations of whole batches of frozen cookie dough that simply evaporated. I have no idea how that happened.

Photo Credit: Geraldine (cookie dough) [CC BY 2.0 (], via Wikimedia Commons
LOL, yum! Now I know what to bake...or at least MIX for you next time we get together! 
Okay, I know people will want to check you out online. Can you give us your website links and contact information?
Of course. I’d love to hear from readers and connect online. Here’s where to find me:
Amazon buy link:

Here’s my bio:
Connie Mann is a licensed boat captain and the author of romantic suspense novels Tangled Lies (May 2016) Angel Falls and Trapped! as well as various works of shorter fiction. She has lived in seven different states but has happily called warm, sunny Florida home for more than twenty years. When she’s not dreaming up plotlines, you’ll find “Captain Connie” on Central Florida’s waterways, introducing boats full of schoolchildren to their first alligator. She is also passionate about helping women and children in developing countries follow their dreams and break the poverty cycle. In addition to boating, she and her husband enjoy spending time with their grown children and extended family and planning their next travel adventures. You can visit Connie online at

Here’s the Tangled Lies back cover copy:
Orphaned as a child in Russia, boat captain Sasha Petrov has spent most of her life adrift, anchored only by her loving foster family. So when they beg her to return to the family marina in Safe Harbor, Florida, for Mama’s sixtieth birthday, Sasha complies, hoping to put the past behind her. But Mama has other plans: she wants her three foster daughters to find Tony, the biological son who disappeared twenty years earlier.

Sasha agrees to try, but that’s easier said than done when bad boy Jesse Claybourne shows up, reigniting an old attraction. Back in Safe Harbor on a quest of his own, Jesse gets tangled up in Sasha’s search, and soon the two are close to uncovering an old town secret that some will stop at nothing to protect.

When Jesse is violently beaten and Sasha’s dog is poisoned, they realize the past is hiding something more sinister than they ever imagined. Can they uncover the truth without destroying Sasha’s family and breaking each other’s hearts, or are they sailing against the wind?

Doesn't that sound AMAZING? For your chance to WIN a FREE COPY of Connie Mann's newest novel, TANGLED LIES, please comment on this post below. One winner will be randomly selected from the comments below this Friday, June 24. 

Good luck, and thank you for being my guest today, Connie!

Happily My Ever After,

Monday, June 20, 2016

FREE Tutorial on Starting and Finishing your Novel for Camp NaNo Participants

It's been a while since I've been blogging--I seem to lack the ability to multi-task, and when I'm busy writing (and parenting--those end-of-school events kill my writing goals!!) I don't seem to find the time to blog.

BUT...I'm here now, and wanted to post this for those of you that are joining Camp NaNo this month to forward your progress on that novel you've been itching to write!

The video below is from a free tutorial I gave last October, and is geared for those of you participating in any version of a novel writing (be it Camp NaNo, or the full-blown NaNoWriMo, of which I am a BIG fan--see my past NaNo posts here).
Here is the video for you:

Good luck in Camp NaNoWriMo!

Happily My Ever After,

P.S. Want to see what my writer's desk looks like during NaNo? Check it out here. And don't judge.